ENDYMION. BOOK III. THERE are who lord it o'er their fellow-men From human pastures; or, O torturing fact! Our gold and ripe-ear'd hopes. With not one tinge Able to face an owl's, they still are dight By the blear-ey'd nations in empurpled vests, And crowns, and turbans. With unladen breasts, 5 10 (1) Woodhouse notes that "Keats said, with much simplicity, 'It will be easily seen what I think of the present ministers, by the beginning of the third Book.'" Perhaps the Quarterly Reviewer had heard of that simple saying. (5) The draft reads O devilish fact!-and in the next line with for through. Save of blown self-applause, they proudly mount Their tiptop nothings, their dull skies, their thrones- 15 Of trumpets, shoutings, and belabour'd drums, And sudden cannon. Ah! how all this hums, (19) The draft has almost in place of past and. (31-2) The draft yields the rejected couplet In the several vastnesses of air and fire; (34) The draft reads How few of these far majesties, how few! 20 135 25 30 35 Our piece of heaven-whose benevolence Shakes hand with our own Ceres; every sense As bees gorge full their cells. And, by the feud 40 Is of all these the gentlier-mightiest. When thy gold breath is misting in the west, She unobserved steals unto her throne, 45 And there she sits most meek and most alone; As if she had not pomp subservient ; As if thine eye, high Poet! was not bent Towards her with the Muses in thine heart; O Moon! the oldest shades 'mong oldest trees (38-9) These two lines stood thus in the draft Salutes our native Ceres-{ and each every } With spiritual honey fills to plenitude...... sense 50 (41) At the end of this line Keats wrote in the original draft, as if to localize the oath he was recording, "Oxford, Septr. 5." (42) The word eterne seems to be another reminiscence of Spenser see Faerie Queene, Book III, Canto vi, Stanza 47 : Yet is eterne in mutabilitie,... (44) The draft reads When thy gold hair falls thick about the west. (49) The draft has Upon in place of Towards. (50) This attribution of an active life of ministration to the stars is a recurrence of the idea in Book II, lines 184-5 Feel palpitations when thou lookest in: 55 Ambitious for the hallowing of thine eyes; And yet thy benediction passeth not One obscure hiding-place, one little spot Where pleasure may be sent the nested wren 60 65 70 (56-7) The draft reads- Thou dost bless all things-even dead things sip (63) In the draft, wrought for sent; and in the next line there is the cancelled reading, Quiet behind dark ivy leaves... (69) The draft reads— The monstrous sea is thine—the monstrous sea! (70) In the draft old occurs in place of far. The word spooming for spuming, though not ordinarily found in dictionaries, was quite in Keats's line of reading. Thus Beaumont and Fletcher in The Double Marriage (Act II, Scene 1) have Down with the foresail too, we'll spoom before her. Dryden, in The Hind and the Panther, has When virtue spooms before a prosperous gale My heaving wishes help to fill the sail. |