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1. "Dicite.Mr. Keightley objects to this commencement of a poem in Iambic trimeters with a dactyl, on the ground that, “though the Scazontes used sometimes to commence verses with a dactyl,” he does not believe that this was the case in the regular Iambic measure.But Horace, in a single ode in regular Iambic trimeters (Epode XVII.), has a dactyl at the beginning at least three times : lines 6, 12, 78. Mr. Keightley adds the remark that all through this poem Milton makes “too frequent use of the dactyl and anapæst.” 2, 3. - noveni .

numinis Memoria mater." Mnemosyne (Memory) was the mother of the nine Muses.

7-10. 'Quis ille," etc.: the Platonic Idea or Archetype. See Introduction, I. pp. 294, 295.

exemplar Dei: the model from which the Deity worked in the creation of Man. II, I2.

Haud ille," etc. The meaning is “This Eternal Idea or Archetype is not a mere conception of the Divine Mind, a kind of twin with Minerva in the brain of Jove."

13-15. Sed, quamlibet,etc.: i.e. “But, though his nature is common, in the sense of being distributed among many, yet he stands apart after the manner of an individual unit, and, wonderful to tell ! is bound to a definite locality.” This seems to be a rendering, in the language of poetical burlesque, of one part of Aristotle's famous criticism of the Platonic doctrine of Ideas or Universals. See Aristotle, Metaph. I. vi.; or, for a summary of the Aristotelian criticism of Plato's Ideas, Schwegler's Hist. of Phil.: translation by Dr. Hutchison Stirling, pp. 101–105.

16—24. “Seu sempiternus," etc. Here Milton, still in poetical burlesque of Aristotle, inquires what is the locality of the Archetype, in what part of the total Mundus he is to be sought; and, in doing so, he falls back, as always, on the Alphonsine conception of the Mundus as a thing of ten spheres (see note to preceding poem, 39–65). Is the Archetype up among the stars, roving among all the ten spheres at his pleasure; or does he inhabit the Moon's sphere only, nearest to the Earth ? If not in those vacancies of mere space, is he to be found perchance down in the Lower World, sitting drowsily on the shores of Lethe, among those souls that are waiting to be ferried back and to re-enter mortal bodies (which would obviously be for the convenience of his business); or does he walk about somewhere on the Earth itself, a giant bigger than Atlas?

23. diis," misprinted " iis” in the edition of 1673.


25-34. "Non, cui profundum," etc. The burlesque is still continued ; only in this form :- “No one can tell where the Archetype is : no one has ever seen him. Not the Dircæan augur (Theban prophet) Tiresias, whose blindness only enlarged his spiritual vision (see Introd. to Par. Lost, II. pp. 101–103); not the god Mercury himself (here called by his Ovidian synonym “ Plöiones nepos"), instructing his band of prophets through the silent night; not any old Assyrian priest, learned in the most ancient lore of Ninos, Belos, and Osiris ; not even Hermes Trismegistus, though he knew all secrets and founded the Egyptian Philosophy (see Il Pens. 88, and note there).

35—39. " At tu,etc. Tu is, of course, Plato; and here, it seems to me, Milton intimates at the close that he does not believe that the Aristotelian representation of Plato's Idea, which he has been burlesquing in the poem, is a true rendering of Plato's real meaning. If it were so, if Plato had really taught any such monstrosity, then, etc. I rather think commentators on the poem have missed its humorous character, and supposed Milton himself to be finding fault with Plato.

36. induxti.The word is misprinted "induxit” in the Second Edition.



3. “gemino de vertice": Mount Parnassus.

14. Clio”: the Muse of History, inasmuch as what he is to say about his father is strictly true.

Promethee ... flammæ": of the fire which Prometheus brought down from Heaven.

21-23 tremebundaque Tartara carmen ima ciere valet,” etc. See L'Allegro, 145–150, and note there.

25. Phæbades," priestesses of Apollo (an Ovidian word); Sibylla," the Sibyls, or prophetic women, of whom there were many, and one of whom gave to the Roman Tarquinius the famous Books of the Sibylline Verses.

32–34. Ibimus," etc. Rev. iv. 4, and v. 8.
35-40. Spiritus et rapidos qui circinat igneus orbes

Nunc quoque sidereis intercinit ipse choreis

Immortale melos,” etc. The “nunchere is emphatic, meaning even now, while we are in this mortal life.” For even now does not the famous spheremusic of Pythagoras (see note, Arcad. 63–73) peal among the constellations (some of these mentioned by name); and what is it that prompts that sphere-music, leads it, and makes the melody

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inexpressible? What but the Fiery Spirit itself which is beyond all the spheres, encircles them all, and regulates their wheelings? See Ezekiel i. 20, and connect that text imaginatively with Milton's idea of the Heaven or Empyrean, as explained in the Introd. to Par. Lost, II. pp. 78, 79. In the present passage, it will be observed, there is a subtle addition of the “Spiritus igneus” of the Empyrean to the ordinary music of the spheres.

37. inenarrabile carmen.Compare Lycid. 176: “the unexpressive nuptial song.” 41–49. “Carmina regales epulas ornare solebant,

Cum nondum luxus,” etc. An allusion to such stories of old bards singing in regal halls as that of Demodocus in the Odyssey, Book VIII., and that of Iopas in the Æneid, I. 740—746. But there is a blended recollection, touched poetically by Milton himself, of many stories of the kind. One might even include, by imaginary foresight, The Lay of the Last Minstrel.Lyæus is a name for Bacchus.

50—55. "Denique quid vocis modulamen inane juvabit,etc. The purport of this passage is that song without words is but poor music. It might suit the sylvan choristers, or birds, but not a divine singer like Orpheus. No: it was not by his mere harp, but by the words of his song as well, that Orpheus performed his great feats in music, drawing the floods and oaks after him, and making even Pluto and the ghosts weep in Hell. See notes, L'Allegro, 145

- 150, and Il Penseroso, 103-108. Ovid, Met. X. 14, speaking of Orpheus, has the phrase "simulacraque functa sepulcris.

56—66. “Nec tu perge, precor,” etc. In connexion with these compliments to his father on his musical distinction see Introd. I. pp. 297, 298.

66. Dividuum.The Latin adjective dividuusfor “divisible”

“divisible into two” had fastened on Milton; and he turned it into English. See Par. Lost, VII. 382 and XII. 85; also On Time, 12.

68—70.Neque ... ire jubebas quà via lata patet," etc. To commerce ? 71, 72. Nec rapis ad leges," etc.

See Introd. I. p. 299. 74. "procul urbano strepitu: i.e. at Horton (see Introd. I. pp. 288, 289). The “sinis,” in the present tense, in line 76, seems to certify that this poem was written there. 79. Cum mihi Romuleæ patuit facundia linguæ, et ... grandia

, magniloquis elata vocabula Graiis: viz. at St. Paul's School and the University; or perhaps rather at St. Paul's School alone, before he went to the University.

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XII. 204:

82-85. “Addere suasisti," etc. Milton seems to have added French, Italian, and Hebrew to his Latin and Greek while he was at the University. His tutor Young had presented him with a Hebrew Bible as early as 1625. It is interesting to know that it was by his father's advice that he ranged beyond Greek and Latin. See stanza 10 of Francini's complimentary Italian Ode to Milton; also note to Translations of Psalms LXXX. - LXXXVIII.

84. barbaricos ... tumultus: i.e. the Germanic invasions, which produced modern Italian by corrupting the old Latin.

Denique quicquid ... per te nôsse licet, per te, si nôsse libebit,etc. The tenses of the verbs seem to show that Milton, when he wrote this poem to his father at Horton, was actually engaged in those miscellaneous scientific studies of which he here speaks. Altogether the probability is that this poem was written shortly after Milton had left the University in 1632. It would be then, if ever, that his father would address to him those mild remonstrances about his disinclination to any profession to which the poem is an answer. Moreover, it is significant of the date that Milton inserted this poem in his own editions just before his Greek pieces, the first of which was written in 1634. 93 I nunc, confer opes,” etc. Warton quotes Ovid, Heroid.

“I nunc, Sisyphias, improbe, confer opes." 98—100. Publica qui juveni commisit lumina nato, atque Hyperionios currus." The “juvenisis Phaethon, to whom his father entrusted the chariot of the Sun (Hyperion here taken for the Sun) 101–104. “ Ergo ego . .

Ergo ego ... victrices hederas inter laurosque sedebo," etc. Todd quotes Virgil, Ecl. VIII. 12, 13 :

“ Hanc sine tempora circum

Inter victrices hederam tibi serpere lauros ” ; and Richardson, for the whole passage, quotes Horace's words in the first of his Odes :

" Me doctarum hederæ præmia frontium

Dîs miscent superis ; me gelidum nemus
Nympharumque leves cum Satyris chori

Secernunt populo.” 107. Sæva nec anguiferos extende, Calumnia, rictus.Compare In Quint. Nov. 146.

115—120.Et vos, O nostri, juvenilia carmina, lusus," etc. It does not seem to me improbable that these six lines were added to the poem just before its publication in the volume of 1645. The phrase "juvenilia carminaseems to refer to that volume as containing this piece among others. Anyhow, it was a beautiful ending, and prophetic.

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See Introduction to these Verses, I. pp. 307, 308. In addition to the criticism of Milton's Greek there quoted from an eminent Greek scholar of last century, the reader may like to see the corresponding criticism of an eminent Greek scholar of a later time. The following remarks have been furnished me, at my request, by my colleague in the University of Edinburgh, Professor S. H. Butcher :

** Psalm CXIV. - This translation is interesting owing to a “certain rhythmical swing in the verses rather than to any accuracy 66 of diction. It be noted as a special point, which indicates “ the delicacy of Milton's ear, that he observes Epic usage as re

gards the hiatus between vowels, although he could not have “ known anything of the grounds on which it rested. But the " mistakes in detail are numerous : (1) wrong forms, as éppónoe “ for punge; (2) false quantities, cilvuévn, where the v is long, “and aivà (for aivn), where the a is long; (3) misapplied words,

as čütpapepộ ệv ådwy, in the sense, as it would seem, of a 'rich “ meadow.' The true meaning of alwn is either 'a threshing-floor' “ or 'a vineyard,' neither of which would be an appropriate place for "a skipping ram. The sense of éürpa epòs (a word which does not

occur in Greek literature, but which would naturally mean 'well“ fed') appears to be modelled on Tpapepò õpovpa, which in late “ authors means 'rich land. The impossible peyaX' ¿KTUMÉOVTA is

evidently intended for peyáda KTUTEOVTA, and is due to a false “ reminiscence of a Homeric phrase. Among doubtful expressions may be reckoned Tapai cúpuyy! (line 11) and mélop (line 12).

· Philosophus ad Regem, etc.—An inferior production, consisting “ of a mixture of Epic dialect and that of Attic prose; Epic construc“ tions such as ei with subjunctive, ei oléoys, ápé Roco (optative without “ áv), and Attic words or phrases, e.g. čvvopos, lws (which is rarely if “ever used except in prose), decvòv Spâv tivá, where, however, idiom “ requires δεινόν τι δράν τινά. Even in Epic the subjunctive οδύρη

. could not here stand as equivalent to the Future Indicative, nor προς θυμόν for κατά θυμόν. The words ύστερον αύθι are meaning

the Homeric Űotepov aťte was doubtless in the author's mind. “ The expression åpedéo Dai kápnvov could not in Greek of any period

mean 'to remove by death’; also onidiws, 'recklessly,' is in this “ context a very doubtful use.

In Effigiei ejus Sculptorem.—The thought is very confusedly expressed. There seems to be no real antithesis between the first “ and the second couplet, such as is at first suggested by tývde pèv « εικόνα and τόν δ' εκτυπωτόν. The metrical errors here are- -(1)

anapæsts in the fifth foot in the two first lines ; (2) a spondee in “ the fourth foot in the last line. Aúrodvės eidos could hardly denote





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