On half the nations, and with fear of change The fellows of his crime, the followers rather (Far other once beheld in bliss) condemn'd 600 605 610 cut, Shakespeare uses the same word speaking of a sear, It was this very sword intrenched it, All's well that ends well, act ii. 609. amerc'd] This word is not used here in its proper law, sense, of mulcted, fined, &c. but, as Mr. Hume rightly observes, has a strange affinity with the Greek augda, to deprive, to take away, as Homer has used it much to our purpose. Οφθαλμων μεν αμερσε, δίδου δ' ηδείαν wodny. The Muse amerced him of his eyes, but gave him the faculty of singing sweetly. Odyss. viii. 64. And the word is used in the same sense in Spenser. 611. —yet faithful how they stood,] To see the true construction of this we must go back to ver. 605. for the verb. The sense then is this, to behold the fellows of his crime condemned Their glory wither'd: as when heaven's fire 615 620 &c. yet how they stood faithful. He had Ovid in his thought, Richardson. 612. —as when heaven's fire Hath scath'd &c.] Hath hurt, hath damaged; a word frequently used in Chaucer, Spenser, Shakespeare, and our old writers. This is a very beautiful and close simile; it represents the majestic stature, and withered glory of the angels; and the last with great propriety, since their lustre was impaired by thunder, as well as that of the trees in the simile: and besides, the blasted heath gives us some idea of that singed burning soil, on which the angels were standing. Homer and Virgil frequently use comparisons from trees, to express the stature or falling of a hero, but none of them are applied with such variety and propriety of circumstances as this of Milton. See An Essay upon Milton's imitations of the Ancients, p. 24. Metam. xi. 419. Ter conata loqui, ter fletibus ora rigavit. Bentley. Tears such as angels weep, like Homer's Ichor of the gods which was different from the blood of mortals. This weeping of Satan and the thoughts of their wretchon surveying his numerous host, ed state, puts one in mind of the story of Xerxes weeping on seeing his vast army, and reflecting that they were mortal, at the to their fate, and to the intended time that he was hastening them destruction of the greatest peo ple in the world, to gratify his own vain glory. 621. Words interwove with sighs found out their way.] Not unlike a line in Fairfax's Tasso, xii. 26. Her sighs her dire complaint did interlace. Interwove is almost peculiar to 619. Thrice he assay'd, and Milton. He has it again, Par. thrice Tears burst forth] Reg. ii. 263. and in Comus, 544. T. Warton. Matchless, but with th' Almighty, and that strife Of knowledge past or present, could have fear'd, Put forth at full, but still his strength conceal'd, 623. —and that strife Was not inglorious,] Ovid, Met. ix. 6. -nec nam 625 630 635 640 nifies their number, as if their exile had emptied heaven. 634. Self-rais'd,] Milton is fond of self in composition. See Turpe fuit vinci, quàm contendisse other instances, in Par. Lost, iii. decorum est. 633. Hath emptied heav'n,] It is conceived that a third part of the angels fell with Satan, according to Rev. xii. 4. And his tail drew the third part of the stars of heaven, and cast them to the earth; and this opinion Milton hath expressed in several places, ii. 692. v. 710. vi. 156: but Satan here talks big and mag 130. v. 860, 254. vii. 154, 242, 510. viii. 572. ix. 183, 607, 1188. x. 1016. xi. 93. Comus, 597. T. Warton. 642. Which tempted our attempt,] Words though well chosen and significative enough, yet of jingling and unpleasant sound, and like marriages between persons too near of kin, to be avoided. Hume. Henceforth his might we know, and know our own, New war, provok'd; our better part remains What force effected not: that he no less Space may produce new worlds; whereof so rife This kind of jingle was undoubtedly thought an elegance by Milton, and many instances of it may be shewn not only in his works, but I believe in all the best poets both ancient and modern, though the latter I am afraid have been sometimes too liberal of them. 647. that he no less &c.] Satan had owned just before, ver. 642. that they had been deceived by God's concealing his strength; he now says, He also shall find himself mistaken in his turn; He shall find our cunning such 645 650 655 660 as that though we have been overpowered, we are not more than half subdued. Richardson. 650. rife] Milton uses and explains rife which is fresh, recent, common, customary, and the like, in Sams. Agon. 866. -that grounded maxim So rife and celebrated in the mouths Of wisest men. Rife would be well translated into Latin by celebris. T. Warton. Rife is prevalent, abounding. Johnson. 662. understood] Not expressed, He spake and to confirm his words, out-flew There stood a hill not far, whose grisly top 667. with grasped arms] The known custom of the Roman soldiers, when they applauded a speech of their general, was to smite their shields with their swords. Bentley. And the epithet grasped, joined to arms, determines the expression to mean swords only, which were spoken of a little before, ver. 664. Pearce. Mr. Upton is of opinion that Milton in what follows imitates both Spenser and Shakespeare, Faery Queen, b. i. cant. iv. st. 40. And clash their shields, and shake their swords on high. Julius Cæsar, act v. 665 670 Defiance, traitors, hurl we in your teeth. Milton in his imitations scarcely ever confines himself to the beauties or expressions of one author, but enriches his diction with the spoils of many, and hence surpasses any one. Letter to Mr. West on Spenser's Faery Queen, p. 23. 669. Hurling defiance toward the vault of heav'n.] Dr. Bentley reads the walls of heav'n. Heaven the habitation of God and angels being never described as vaulted; and Dr. Pearce approves the emendation; and without doubt the wall or walls of heaven is a common expression with our author. But may we not by the vault of heaven understand cœli convexa, our visible heaven, which is often described as vaulted, the sphere of the fixed stars above which God and angels inhabit? Hurling defiance toward the visible heaven is in effect hurling defiance toward the invisible heaven, the seat of God and angels. 671. Belch'd] So Virgil, Æn. |